Title

I am not sure about the title, unless we planned on filming in black and white only as a way to suggest these spaces were colored with life and people at one time, but I am not sure if conceptually that will work or would be ascetically the right choice.

I like the "space" but maybe we should play around with time and/or landscape in the title. Colored with the connotation (absent of some style choice like filming in black and white) might raise some distracting discussion to the central theme. Space and time are both characters we are working with in some conceptual way, why not put them in the title and make the viewer confront what those term conceptually mean to us and to them?

But.....for a defense of "colored"......

I always had a visual idea in my head for a film which addressed race in some way. Here my idea, I don't know how or if it would work for our purposes but, I imagine a linear chronological story of race relations where by the viewer would learn that race was reductive to merely black and white and thus was blind or absent to color. I don't want to go into my original story idea to explain this, but in my head say we film in color at the beginning of the film and as the film goes on and we learn about these two places and times (Sanford and Ocoee), a color from the film is taken away and replaced with black and white, so the films starts in color and slowly without the viewer noticing the film ends in black and white because the color has been removed during the course of the story. Or the colors could become grayer until it is in black and white at the end. I sort of like the one color at a time, but that might be beyond our technical and financial abilities.

I am not sure if this is doable with our shoestring budget or if conceptually it would work, but if we play with color in that abstract kind of way then color in the title would represent a character like time and space do.

This is just an idea, I am not at all married to it.

Possible new title: "Colored Spaces" or "Spaces of Color"

CHAPTER 1:  OCOEE

a).  we take the viewer by the hand and lead them back through time.

FILM LEADER JITTER TO BLACK, CUT TO OLD FADED COLOR FILM
8mm home movies of a family's trip to Disneyworld, circa 1975 (projector sounds)
-DISSOLVE-
16mm 1950s or 60s Florida Chamber of Commerce film with nerdy male voiceover about the "thriving metropolis of Orlando"
-DISSOLVE-
1920s or 30s B&W film archive or more likely photos of 1920s Florida and Black grove workers
(we hear female voice (Kathy?) reading (Hurston?) description of Orlando or the Central Florida area during the 1920s OR reading from one of the early tourist pamphlets provided by Kathy OR both, and how the citrus was grown in rural areas and taken to Sanford for shipping to the north)

-DIP TO BLACK-
-FADE UP FROM BLACK-

Artwork map that includes Orlando and Sanford as references, but moves in to the road that connects Ocoee with Apopka
(steaboat sounds fade to train sounds fade to grove worker sounds, fade to running sounds)

b). the viewer learns that the Colored spaces in Ocoee disappeared on Election Night, 1920

CUT TO VIDEO
(soft and delicate music fades in)

Present day HDV video peaceful beauty shots of Ocoee's downtown, Starke Lake, etc.
(young male voice reads newspaper accounts of the 1920 election violence...)

pause for a beat

Present day HDV video shots of irrigation ditches, abandoned land, new development
(female voice reads letter about the massacre)

Present day HDV video with natural sounds of grove workers picking oranges, sweating, dumping oranges, climbing ladders
(we hear Stephen's voice reading poem about Ocoee massacre)

Present day HDV video shots of Ocoee abandoned grove, golf course, etc.
(poem continues to the end, we hear natural sounds of cars on the road)

pause for a beat as car sounds fade out with music

Present day HDV video of Stephen silently reading sign at Black burial ground.  Pan of the neighborhood.  Shots of an empty swing the neighborhood playground.

pause for a beat

Wideshot of Lake Apopka at dusk, time lapse of sun going down in the west, reflection of moon on the lake with nighttime cricket sounds

-FADE TO BLACK-

CHAPTER 2: SANFORD

Artwork map appears again as music fades in.  This time the map animates toward Sanford.